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\Kate Hatch
15 September 2008
How to Teach Writing
The best teacher I have ever had taught me that writing well is a skill that can be learned by anyone. She believed that having voice incorporated in a paper only made it stronger, and encouraged all students to explore their writing styles to better themselves as writers. According to her, a good writer was someone who knew all the grammatical tools, could quote just about any work, but still had the ability to turn an old idea into a new personalized one. In essence, her philosophy was, " learn the rules first, then you can break them." The experience I had with this teacher lead me to the realization that not all teachers are as committed to improving their students' writing as she was, and that good teachers are needed for students to learn the basics of writing before they can become great writers.


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In the classroom, a natural role of authority and submission is always present. This is in part because of traditions that people who have knowledge, and it is assumed that teachers do, are usually in power over the masses that have less knowledge. When this natural power distribution takes place it allows for one person to lead all those under them to a place where they can use information effectively. In the classroom it is a teachers' job to guide his or her students so that they can also obtain the information they need to become great writers.


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This guidance begins in a strictly Bartholomae based classroom. In this class students can learn to analyze great works, which is important because it shows students the art of writing, and it gives an example of what a person should be writing about and how they should be writing about said subject. When students learn mechanics and correct usage as well as organization they are able to create compelling arguments. However, under this particular teaching style only a specific type of writing is valued. The problem with this is that a student only begins to appreciate what their teachers appreciate, in turn causing the student to lose his or her voice.


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Many fundamentalists believe that this losing of voice is necessary in the beginning of education because it allows for total control over the students by the teachers. However, complete control only allows lack of growth in the students case and eliminates potential for growth in the academic field itself. It is important for students to regain control once they have learned all the basics. In order to regain this power students have to find their own voice, rather than just repeating that of their teachers, fellow students and mentors.


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In personal experience, gaining voice once it was lost is not nearly as complicated as many people had set it up to be. Once a teacher has given their students all the basics on how to write well it is the students job to use these tools to write in their own way. The best way to allow students to improve their voice is simply have them write. Like in Elbows method, students need the opportunity to write without judgment in order for them to decide what is important to them and how to convey that to their readers.


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One way to learn to write with ones own voice is to simply write. This is a struggle for many writers once they have completed the Bartholomae training because they feel that the only opinions that matter are those of academics. To overcome this, teachers should start by offering some prompt and then slowly branching out to giving students complete freedom to write about whatever they feel is important. Over time students will learn to use the tools they acquired in their traditional training to better their personal writing. The main argument behind not allowing students to rein free in the writing is that students are not academics and therefore do not have authority to write as if they were.

The question that should be asked is not whether or not students are capable of writing as academics, regardless of their training, but rather do students have something worthy to say that academics should be listening to? This is more than a question of voice, but a question of importance in the academic world. Shouldn't the teacher student relationship always be a learning one? Does it really matter who is doing the learning as long as the collective is improving?  Good writing teachers are able to guide their students through the foundations of writing as well as allow their students to explore their creative sides.


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To assume that only one way of teaching is correct would be naive because people learn in different ways. With this in mind, teachers should offer up many different types of teaching to insure that all of their students have the ability to become good writers.

Posted by stra6907 on September 15, 2008
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bvaldez1988 on paragraph 1:

The story about your teacher and how her ideas has helped you in writing was excellent. It pulls the reader in.

September 16, 2008 8:17 am
bvaldez1988 on paragraph 3:

I liked how you used cause/effect. Because of this, that will happen.

September 16, 2008 8:19 am
bvaldez1988 on whole page :

This essay was easy to read and it flowed really well. I liked how you included a personal story because it connects the reader with you and it makes the reading more accessible.
Thanks for sharing your story with me!
Beatriz V

September 16, 2008 8:21 am
Lindsey Y on whole page :

Kate
I enjoyed reading your essay mainly because your voice came through. You were able to use your own experiences to write this essay. I liked the use of comparing the different classroom settings and how you were able to tie it all together and show the difference between “good” and “bad” teachers, Overall great paper.

Lindsey Y

September 16, 2008 12:31 pm
Jamie on paragraph 6:

The first sentence in the this paragraph feels like it’s hindering the flow of the paragraph. Perhaps consider emitting the word ‘one’ and using a more personal word to keep the flow going.

September 16, 2008 1:01 pm
Jamie on paragraph 8:

Nice concluding paragraph, however I am unsure about the usage of the word ‘insure.’

September 16, 2008 1:08 pm
Jamie on whole page :

Kate,
Overall I really enjoyed reading your paper. You had great voice, and were able to keep my attention throughout the paper. Perhaps consider not having such long sentences at parts; I found this to be a bit distracting and think if they were to be more broken up it would flow better. I especially enjoyed your opening and how it tied in continuously into the rest of your paper.
Good job, thank you for sharing this with me!
-Jamie

September 16, 2008 1:12 pm
mjanel02 on paragraph 4:

I really like this paragraph. You give a very strong opinion.

September 16, 2008 2:06 pm
mjanel02 on whole page :

Kate –
I really enjoyed your essay. You made a very strong argument and I was able to follow your opinions of the argument.
Thanks for sharing your paper with me!
Melissa

September 16, 2008 2:10 pm
victoria on paragraph 1:

I liked how you opened the piece with a personal story and still outlined your essay without blatantly saying “this is what my essay is about”

September 16, 2008 2:59 pm
victoria on paragraph 2:

I like that you addressed the power dynamics in classrooms as an important role

September 16, 2008 3:00 pm
victoria on paragraph 4:

Your first sentence in paragraph 4 sounds a little jumbled because of the tense usage of “losing” Perhaps consider revision. I like this paragraph because it talks about the empowerment of the student.

September 16, 2008 3:04 pm
victoria on whole page :

Kate,
Overall I like your piece. I like how you bought up the idea of the improvement of the collective and how the foundations of writing are important. This ties into your intro paragraph about your teacher’s philosophy on writing.
Thanks for sharing,
-Victoria

September 16, 2008 3:08 pm
Monte on paragraph 3:

Doesn’t “the art of writing” encompass a wide variety of things, since it is stated as an art?

September 17, 2008 11:21 am
Monte on paragraph 5:

I agree with you. I think most students are still trying to find their own voice in any sense when they are taught academic discourse, which gives them some sort of structure to follow while they search for their own voice.

September 17, 2008 11:23 am
Monte on whole page :

Kate,
Your essay is really strong and argument is compelling. I think it’s very valid to empower your reader in saying that it’s an easy responsibility to discover your own voice. I really enjoyed the structured logic of your essay and the way it builds into an ultimatum in paragraph seven. The concept of mutual education is a great concept to enhance our overall education.
Monte

September 17, 2008 11:28 am
illaria on whole page :

Kate,
I really enjoyed your essay. I like how you explored the various ways the writing classroom can work and how you feel they work best. I liked how you used personal experience in the beginning however, I think it may be beneficial to add some more personal experience.
Thanks for sharing your paper with me.
~Hilary

September 17, 2008 7:20 pm
illaria on paragraph 5:

I think this is a good point but I’m wondering if a person can truly gain their voice back without the impact of everything learned when it was lost creeping in? In other words wouldn’t that voice lost, have other things added to it or changed once it was found again? I hope that makes sense.

September 17, 2008 7:24 pm
illaria on paragraph 2:

I like how you defined the roles of teachers and students.

September 17, 2008 7:26 pm
Mitchell on whole page :

Kate -
I liked you eassy. It flowed nicely. I only suggest cutting down a few of your sentences because they can kind of get long and I lost track in some of them.
Thanks for sharing your paper with me,
Mitchell
mitchellwoll@hotmail.com

September 18, 2008 1:11 am
Kristin Nugent on whole page :

Kate-
Thank you for sharing this paper with me! I really liked how you brought what Bartholomae and Elbow teach into the real world classroom. I totally agree with your first paragraph – that it takes a good teacher for the student to comprehend the class, whether it is taught Elbow style or Bartholomae style. I do feel that this essay is lacking voice. Maybe put more of your ideas into the middle and end of the paper, so we know which stance you take.
Great job!!
Kristin
nuge5901@bears.unco.edu

September 18, 2008 10:19 am
dra08 on whole page :

test post

September 18, 2008 11:23 am
chibihi on whole page :

Kate,
This is a good essay, I really like the first paragraph and it’s story about your teacher. Your wrote about voice but didn’t actually have voice in this essay, besides the first paragraph. Thanks for sharing your essay.
Chantelle

September 18, 2008 4:16 pm
Amanda on whole page :

Kate,
I really enjoyed your essay. you addressed a lot of issues and say a lot of things most of us would love to as well. I agree with your stance that there is more than one way to teach and no one way is more write than the next, I especially love your use of the word naive in the last paragraph!
Amanda

September 18, 2008 7:50 pm
Lindsay on whole page :

Kate,
I really like you paper and ideas you have in it. My paper is similar to your thought process on the whole what to teach in a writing class and how to teach it.
-Lindsay M

September 18, 2008 8:38 pm
Mateja on paragraph 1:

The story in the intro is really effective to introducing your point, but also giving your paper personal voice.

September 19, 2008 8:09 am
Mateja on whole page :

Kate,
Thank you for sharing your paper, I really enjoyed reading it. I enjoyed your opening paragraph, I thought your voice really shined through. I think including more of your personal experiences would make the essay even stronger. Thanks again!
Mateja

September 19, 2008 8:13 am
dra08 on whole page :

From Jeremy:
Kate I really enjoyed your paper. I think that your paper is very well structured and balanced, giving equal time for opposing viewpoints. However, as a reader, I know that I would like to hear you expound on your solution a little bit more. Perhaps give a few examples of what this class would look like if many different styles of writing were encouraged. Keep up the good work.

September 25, 2008 3:19 pm
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