I liked your essays especially when comparing them to what you said in your About. Despite your fear you incorporated much of yourself into your essays and even realized that this lead to better more smooth writing in the end. This shows that you grew as a writer and your essays show this as well. This is especially true for your last essay in which you were able to write a good essay about a very emotional subject. Overall great job and thanks for sharing,
-Victoria
Kate
I liked your essays especially when comparing them to what you said in your About. Despite your fear you incorporated much of yourself into your essays and even realized that this lead to better more smooth writing in the end. This shows that you grew as a writer and your essays show this as well. This is especially true for your last essay in which you were able to write a good essay about a very emotional subject. Overall great job and thanks for sharing,
-Victoria